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 ====== Emperor Zendrolion ======
-There have been two Emperor's of Thyatis with this name.
+There have been two Emperor's of [[:thyatis|Thyatis]] with this name.
 ===== Zendrolion I =====
-General Zendrolion Tatriokanitas, the first Emperor of Thyatis.  Reigned for AC 0 to AC 20 and was succeded by his wife, Emperor Valentia //the Justifier//.
+General Zendrolion Tatriokanitas, the first Emperor of [[:thyatis|Thyatis]].  Reigned from AC 0 till AC 20 and was succeded by his wife, Emperor Valentia //the Justifier//.
-He was born in Kerendas in BC 41 and was apprenticed to a gladiator in BC 30.  He becamo Commander of Mercenaries in Kerendas City in BC 20, and under Governor Lucinius Trenzantenbium he became General of Kerendas in BC 12.
+He was born in Kerendas in BC 41 and was apprenticed to a gladiator in BC 30.  He rose to become Commander of Mercenaries in Kerendas City in BC 20, and under Governor Lucinius Trenzantenbium he was appointed General of Kerendas in BC 12.
-He became the first Emperor of Thyatis, ruling over Thyatis, Hattias, Kerendas, Ochalea, the Pearl Islands, and the western half of the Isle of Dawn.  His reign is known as the begining of "The Bright Age" by his supports, or as the new despotism, by his detractors.  Kantrium, Retebius, Biazzan, and Buhrohur, are added as dominions during his reign.
+He became the first Emperor of [[:thyatis|Thyatis]], ruling over [[:thyatis|Thyatis]], Hattias, Kerendas, Ochalea, the Pearl Islands, and the western half of the Isle of Dawn.  His reign is known as the begining of "The Bright Age" by his supports, or as "The New Despotism" by his detractors.  Kantrium, Retebius, Biazzan, and Buhrohur, are added as dominions during his reign.
 Family: Wife Valentia and daughters.
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 [[http://www.pandius.com/thy_hist.html|History of the Thyatian People]] at the Vaults by [[http://www.pandius.com/jruhland.html|James Ruhland]] \\
 [[http://www.pandius.com/thyempr.html|Thyatian emperors]] at the Vaults by [[http://www.pandius.com/zendroln.html|Simone Neri]] \\
-[[http://www.thepiazza.org.uk/bb/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=772|About the Thyatian Emperor's]] discussion at the Piazza between S. Morris, S. Neri, & G. Weatherup
+[[http://www.thepiazza.org.uk/bb/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=772|About the Thyatian Emperor's]] discussion at the Piazza between M. C. (//LoZompatore//), S. Morris, S. Neri, & G. Weatherup
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